Trying to figure this thing out..!

Sun, 27 Aug 2006 14:10:09 GMT

O.k so heres a poem...that I wrote, Comment it and tell me wutcha think!

Im lost inside these feelings..
not a word to describe
you rest every nite
without a word of goodnight
a tear in my eye..
fades away with a blink of an eye
missed comottions
i just want to fly away
far from this old life
you hurt my heart
like u stabbed it as with a point of a knife.
why is life not so nice?
Im running around in circles
but i cant see the light....
its a dark round hole
i cant escape..
my feelings sourounding me ..
i dono wut to do...
im lost inside these feelings....
and i cant escape..!

So wutcha think...!??!? I'm in the middle of publishing it.. and i dono how it sounds so it would really help if u guys helped me out... and tell me wutcha thought about it!
Thanks, ♥ Kelsey!

ok so im new at this

Sun, 27 Aug 2006 04:26:31 GMT

Well..a little bit about me..! I have an awesome b/f whom i love very much! Hes the greatest thing that has happened to me in a very long time! I would do anything for this boi! I am a cheerleader at OJHS...and I am captain of the Volleyball Team...! I am in all Gifted Honors classes! And i have the bestest friends in the whole world...! If i didnt have half of them I probly wouldnt be here today! I love them ALL so much!

I have had a rough life at times..but its a lot better..! I dont really like to drink all that much, yeah i will but its not my fav. thing to do! I dont like to be out really late...!

hmm...im trying to stay with the basics for my first time...so i guess thats bout it...

♥ Kelsey

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Trying to figure this thing out..!

ok so im new at this