urn:lj:livejournal.com:atom1:elmohasabobo elmohasabobo elmohasabobo 2006-08-27T14:10:09Z urn:lj:livejournal.com:atom1:elmohasabobo:703 2006-08-27T14:10:09Z 2006-08-27T14:10:09Z Country O.k so heres a poem...that I wrote, Comment it and tell me wutcha think! <br /><br /><br />Im lost inside these feelings..<br />not a word to describe<br />you rest every nite <br />without a word of goodnight<br />a tear in my eye..<br />fades away with a blink of an eye<br />missed comottions<br />i just want to fly away<br />far from this old life<br />you hurt my heart <br />like u stabbed it as with a point of a knife.<br />why is life not so nice? <br />Im running around in circles<br />but i cant see the light....<br />its a dark round hole <br />i cant escape..<br />my feelings sourounding me ..<br />i dono wut to do...<br />im lost inside these feelings....<br />and i cant escape..! <br /><br /><br />So wutcha think...!??!? I'm in the middle of publishing it.. and i dono how it sounds so it would really help if u guys helped me out... and tell me wutcha thought about it! <br />Thanks, &hearts; Kelsey! urn:lj:livejournal.com:atom1:elmohasabobo:262 2006-08-27T04:26:31Z 2006-08-27T04:26:31Z Feels Like Friday Well..a little bit about me..! I have an awesome b/f whom i love very much! Hes the greatest thing that has happened to me in a very long time! I would do anything for this boi! I am a cheerleader at OJHS...and I am captain of the Volleyball Team...! I am in all Gifted Honors classes! And i have the bestest friends in the whole world...! If i didnt have half of them I probly wouldnt be here today! I love them ALL so much! <br /><br /><br />I have had a rough life at times..but its a lot better..! I dont really like to drink all that much, yeah i will but its not my fav. thing to do! I dont like to be out really late...! <br /><br />hmm...im trying to stay with the basics for my first time...so i guess thats bout it...<br /><br />&hearts; Kelsey