O.k so heres a poem...that I wrote, Comment it and tell me wutcha think!
Im lost inside these feelings..
not a word to describe
you rest every nite
without a word of goodnight
a tear in my eye..
fades away with a blink of an eye
missed comottions
i just want to fly away
far from this old life
you hurt my heart
like u stabbed it as with a point of a knife.
why is life not so nice?
Im running around in circles
but i cant see the light....
its a dark round hole
i cant escape..
my feelings sourounding me ..
i dono wut to do...
im lost inside these feelings....
and i cant escape..!
So wutcha think...!??!? I'm in the middle of publishing it.. and i dono how it sounds so it would really help if u guys helped me out... and tell me wutcha thought about it!
Thanks, ♥ Kelsey!
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